Fieldwork Reflection for Performance Art Piece

I was told that moving around is interesting and how I should engage the space and I plan on doing a lot more of that. I was also told to zoom out so my space could be seen better, which is what I will be doing as well, especially after looking over the fieldwork myself. In both of the fieldworks, I was told that doing the patty cake motion a different way throughout the performance piece was provocative, which I plan on changing up my motions as well and make them more movey (I guess that is the word for it?). Overall, I feel that the feedback on my fieldworks were very helpful in making my final Performance Art piece.